我的电脑世界my computer world

作者：戴尔 大学一年级

My father bought me a computer this summer vacation,and connected it with the internet.So this summer holiday,I spent all my spare time on it.First,I learned how to operate it .Then I wandered around the internet.

What should I do ?I first went to the music world to see which song was Number 1 and who was the most popular singer.And next,why not have a look at the film news?I wanted to know what was on.I also collected some information about school in China.

I was so interested in the world computer brought to me .Mother called me a computer fan.

【英语作文网点评】文章写自己熟悉的事物，真实可信，语言通顺，结构井然有序，结尾自然点题。